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Jacky avatarJacky · 2010-06-14

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各位大師～您好請幫忙我檢查一下英文文法有沒有錯，還有把中文的地方翻成英文，假如有不妥之處，可以幫我增修一些文句，感恩^^　　Mynameisreuben.Iam20andwasborninTaipei,Taiwan.Therearefourfamilymembers,includingmyparents,who自己開小吃店,onelittlesisterandme.TheyarealwaystheretobemysupportwheneverIaminsorrowandtoshareinmyjoywheneverIamindeli
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Skylar DavisLinda avatarSkylar DavisLinda2010-06-16
MynameisReuben.Iam20yearsoldandIwasborninTaipei,Taiwan.Therearefourpersonsinmyfamilyandmyparentsownedalittlerestaurant.AndIhaveayoungsister.TheyarealwaystherebeingmysupportwhenIamsadandofcourseIcansharemyhappinesswiththem.　　WhenIhavefreetime,Iliketolistentothemusic,playon-linegames,andtalktofriendsinMSN.Whenlisteningtothemusic,IfeelthatIgoingintoafantasticworld.Somusicismyfavorite.　　Myfavo